Hey so
a lot of guys seem interested
I was like meh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ so
here ya go, the chapters are ok length I guess
I don’t super hate it or anything
(and a lot of people have commented they can’t afford donating DON’T DONATE IF YOU CAN’T)
What do you guys think of ads and then the revenue goes towards donating? Would you completely just ditch the site or are you ok with it?
IT’S BEEN REACHED
Special thanks to my friend who will be going by Viv who helped translate a portion!
She’s helped I think once before and I probably referred to her by her initials VZ
I think she will be continuing with Stunning Edge and:
Meanwhile people seem to like WSB and I was like eh why not
I haven’t read ahead or anything so I really don’t know and my only opinion is meh, don’t super dislike or like so,
I think I’ll be continuing until
a) get bored/start disliking
b) school starts/no time
edit: Turkey milit takeover?? ok… world’s getting crazier as the days go by I swear
PS: donations plis? ONLY if you can afford it
A few people mentioned they couldn’t really judge with just 2 chapters and some others mentioned wanting the synopsis
So tada, the synopsis (I put it on the table of contents page, but if u lazy like me, hehe, here it is):
Transmigration is the total rage of novels nowadays, and if the main character isn’t careful, they get swept up into the bandwagon, so this is a story from another continent. Magic? —— of course the main character won’t know how to use it, but what about knowing how to use electricity? Dou Qi? —— the main character still doesn’t know, but is inner power more strong? Beautiful women? —— of course the main character has them, or else there wouldn’t be anything worth reading in this novel. How many? —— that question’s quite good, if I told you everything, what would you read for? An honest warning to the female readers and your tastes, it is a harem novel, don’t read it if you’re not interested. A stern warning to male readers and your tastes, um, it’s like a breath of fresh air.
^This is the actual synopsis, no kidding. Kinda agree with the transmigration thing, there’s a ton of those and its either to a wuxia/xianxia world or fantasy/gaming world usually, or at least, that’s what I see a lot.
Personal eval/analysis of story so far:
There’s only 2 pull factors so far, one being that Ramos is a fallen noble or something (hey I translated the first chapter months ago, I can’t remember properly XD), two being the random stranger Lingfeng who was randomly unconscious. They make it so that Ramos seems to have a lot of potential, like he’s smart and relatively strong. Meanwhile, I have lower hopes for Lingfeng seeing as he seems to not have been healed that way before and Luna doesn’t seem to be portrayed as a high class character, so Lingfeng not knowing that seems to lower my expectations.
Personal eval/analysis of synopsis:
Erm, it seems to be trying to be original, but it feels sorta mediocre to me. There’s nothing that super stands out. Also, and this is what degrades it to me personally the most, it seems to be saying that girls won’t like it so uh….. Doesn’t seem like it would mesh with Stunning Edge readers (I’m being broad here, not saying that all Stunning Edge readers would dislike it)
EDIT: THE ACCURACY WAS CHECKED BY KANOI!!!! She’s so nice omg
Hello, this is BuzzBannana
I had translated chapter 1 and part of chapter 2 a while back
A loooooooooooong while back
It was on accident because I was searching for the raws of Stunning Edge and the names are similar
Anyways, I was going through old files when I spotted this and thought it would be a waste not to post work anyways so
I don’t plan on translating this honestly, it was such a struggle trying to get through it @_@ I wasn’t really interested
Anyways
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
EDIT: just in case they wanted creds, (I almost forgot) DG helped with grammar on chapter 1 and Kanoi helped with accuracy on chapter 1
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